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Samuel Kummer
Kummer at the organ console of the Frauenkirche
- ... that Samuel Kummer chose for his first recital as the organist of the restored Frauenkirche in Dresden music by Bach, Brahms, Max Reger, Louis Vierne, and his own? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Olga Lander
- Comment: Appeared ITN, but without blurb, so eligible. I'm sad about having to tell this story.
5x expanded by Gerda Arendt (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 2103 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:00, 30 April 2024 (UTC).
- I've taken the liberty of proposing a rearranged ALT0a for reasons of grammar, as it was looking a bit breathless, and so that it ends with "Samuel Kummer" instead of "his own".
- ALT0a: ... that for his first recital as the organist of the restored Frauenkirche in Dresden, Samuel Kummer chose music by Bach, Brahms, Max Reger, Louis Vierne, and Samuel Kummer?
- --Launchballer 10:21, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
@Gerda Arendt: This is the oldest fully unreviewed nom and I need a QPQ, so I'm reviewing. New enough, blurbless ITN notwithstanding, and long enough. Earwig has no valid complaints. Looking at ALT0a now, Reger and Vierne are lesser 'names' and I'd expect a more merciless prepbuilder to cut them, but I'll let them make that decision. Two things; as written, the 'Life and career' section would deserve {{subsections}} (and surely 'Personal life' comes under Life and career anyway), and single-sentence WP:PARAGRAPHs should be avoided - this should be reordered somehow.--Launchballer 22:54, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review, Launchballer! I tried subheaders but am not happy, because it's impossible to be halfway chronological with groups, - help wanted. I know that single sentences should be avoided, but there is only one sourced sentence about his teaching, and it fits nowhere else. The single sentence about the award for the recording belongs to the preceding quote, - would you know a way to connect it (besides not using template quote)? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:07, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
