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This page transcludes a subset of the nominations found on the page of all the approved nominations for the "Did you know" section of the Main Page. It only transcludes the nominations filed under dates of the fourth-most recent week. The page is intended to allow editors to easily review recent nominations that may not be displaying correctly on the complete page of approved nominations if that page's contents are causing the page to hit the post-expand include size limit.

Aurora Gaming, Fire Beavers[edit]

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  • Reviewed: 55 Broad Street and The End of Everything (novel) Soulbust (talk) 02:00, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: QPQ to come soon; hoping WP:IAR can be applied for this nom. I think this can be a silly/quirky hook, so open to ALT hooks/phrasing as well to accentuate the quirkiness of it. Moved both pages to mainspace on May 4, so a few hours shy on the 7-day week limit. Just get busy offline and also on Wikipedia and lose track of the time tbh. Sorry about that. Soulbust (talk) 01:51, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Moved to mainspace by Soulbust (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. Nominator has 35 past nominations.

Soulbust (talk) 01:51, 12 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Both articles were moved into the mainspace almost six hours late from the prescribed seven-day period. It can be pardoned, however, as the joint nomination is otherwise DYK-compliant—long enough, well sourced (with primary and Twitter sources used sparingly), neutral, and copyvio-free—and nominator clearly has real-life commitments; invoking IAR privilege is totally reasonable. Furthermore, the hook is cited (both in the article and nom page) and witty for the most part. Since QPQs have been given, this should be good to go. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 13:29, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

C. J. Hanson[edit]

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  • ... that in 2024, C. J. Hanson became the first player from his school to be chosen in the NFL draft since 1989, and the team that chose him also chose the previous player?
  • Source: Kansas City Star ("He’s the first player from Holy Cross selected in the NFL Draft since the Chiefs selected linebacker Rob McGovern in 1989")
5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 178 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:00, 11 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Article was nominated in the proper time. Five time expansion verified. Article is policy compliant with sourcing and citations. No copyright violations found. Hook fact is verified and moderately interesting. Hook length is fine. This can be promoted.4meter4 (talk) 20:40, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Chronotropic incompetence[edit]

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Created by Femke (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

—Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:39, 10 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I found this an interesting hook that caught my attention. AGF on restricted sources, although available extracts seemed to confirm the facts. Only comment would be that this article could possibly be improved by an infobox, e.g. Template:Infobox medical condition, or other supporting material, although this is not strictly necessary for DYK. CSJJ104 (talk) 00:59, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This article needs a lead section, as it would deserve {{lead missing}} without one.--Launchballer 11:55, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Good idea about the infobox, will try to add something later. Per MOS:NOLEAD, the article is not long enough to require a lead, unless there is some DYK-specific rule I'm unaware of. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 16:40, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If I'm reading that correctly, then articles are exempted from having them when they are stubs, and stubs can't run per WP:DYKSTUB.--Launchballer 16:46, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I read the policy slightly differently, i.e. stubs and other articles under 400/500 words don't require a lead. Often, the threshold for not being a stub anymore is roughly 250/300 words. So shorter Start articles also don't always benefit from a lead section. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 16:54, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've added an infobox and slightly expanded the article so it's more clearly above the stub threshold. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:10, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I still think the article would benefit from having a brief lead, such as "Chronotropic incompetence (CI) is the inability of heart rate to increase as expected in response to exercise. The condition can be defined in different ways and occurs in various diseases. Sufferers have a higher risk of cardiovascular disease and early death."--Launchballer 19:30, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reuben Solo[edit]

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Created by Sdkb (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 41 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Sdkb talk 00:42, 7 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • New article that was created on 6 May 2024‎‎‎ is 2,548 characters and nominated on the same day. No copyvios detected (high confidence of violation due to direct quotes that have all been cited; AGF sources which can't go through Dup detector). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 106 characters long (under 200 character max.) and is interesting. Ref 4 (verifying the hook) is a reliable source from The Scotsman. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 05:56, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Fang Yi'ai[edit]

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  • ... that the Tang dynasty politician Fang Yi'ai, together with his wife Princess Gaoyang, rebelled against Emperor Gaozong of Tang, but their rebellion was swiftly suppressed, resulting in their deaths? Source: 玄武门实录 (in Chinese). Beijing Book Co. Inc. 1 June 2017. ISBN 978-7-5168-1411-6.
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Created by TheGreatPeng (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

TheGreatPeng (talk) 10:01, 6 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Review below, fascinating work!
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: None required.

Overall: AGF on foreign language sources – I was able to Google Translate the source page to confirm it, but because that's not a perfect translation, the AGF stands. Proposing a slight rewording in the ALT below to increase hookiness, but either would work. Nomader (talk) 14:27, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I can't promote ALT1 as it introduces new information, but it is AGF sourced, interesting, and short enough.--Launchballer 08:52, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Zer0[edit]

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  • ... that Apex Legends player Zer0 is considered by many to be the game's best In-Game Leader in professional competitions?
Created by Soulbust (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 36 past nominations.

Soulbust (talk) 23:23, 14 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. Waiting on QPQ. Prefer ALT1. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:52, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Kefah Ali Deeb[edit]

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  • ... that for Syrian artist Kefah Ali Deeb (pictured) the weather god Hadad is an example of ancient myths?
Created by Munfarid1 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 20 past nominations.

Munfarid1 (talk) 21:34, 11 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Performing a review here. A QPQ is in progress for Hae Nang Maew, and I'm WP:AGF that it will be completed. The sources for the article look to be reliable, and I see no red flags as far as NPOV. Article is sufficiently new and long.
  • Let's work with ALT1, as I think it's the most interesting for outside readers. It also needs some edits to be clear for an outside reader.. "Instead of" is a little unclear as it implies that maybe she was supposed to do something and disobeyed. The article is more accurate in that the chair "represented her artistic vision of Syrian victims and refugees". We should also somehow note the Syrian context, both for the artist and refugees. This probably doesn't need more than a few wording tweaks, if you want to try again. Shooterwalker (talk) 15:42, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Thanks for your review and comments. - How about ALT1a then? Munfarid1 (talk) 16:00, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • It's really close. Can we re-add context of who she is? (e.g.: a Syrian artist and activist?) I might consider a more precise word than "vision". Maybe "representation"? But if there isn't a better word, "vision" is fine. Shooterwalker (talk) 16:26, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
        • Well, I have added Syrian artist to ALT1b now, but IMHO "vision" is the better word here. Hooks are supposed to be somewhat enigmatic, to make people curious. I think you can choose now, and finish your review. Munfarid1 (talk) 21:02, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
          • I agree "vision" is better. Let's go ahead with ALT1b. . Shooterwalker (talk) 13:58, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
            • I just changed the picture to the empty chair, as I think this will attract more attention than the earlier suggested portrait of the artist. Hope this is okay for everyone.Munfarid1 (talk) 10:11, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ryoko Kui[edit]

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Created by Ornithoptera (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 30 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Ornithoptera (talk) 05:16, 7 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Interesting short article; it is well-sourced and well-written. I prefer the original hook over ALT1. My only suggestion is that mangaka should be unlinked per policy on consecutive Wikilinks and changed to "manga artist" for clarity's sake. Yue🌙 23:07, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Jeffrey Veregge[edit]

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Created by ThadeusOfNazereth (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

ThadeusOfNazereth(he/him)Talk to Me! 11:42, 7 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Always awesome to see more articles on Indigenous topics and personalities on Wikipedia! Everything seems to check out. It's new enough, long enough, sourced and neutral. Earwig detects no plagiarism. Hook is cited and interesting! QPQ has been completed! Cheers! Ornithoptera (talk) 21:14, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Kortnei Johnson[edit]

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Johnson at the 2018 NCAA DI Indoor Championships
Johnson at the 2018 NCAA DI Indoor Championships
  • Reviewed: No needed.
Created by Habst (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

— Habst (talk) 20:25, 7 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Comment: I added an alternative hook since the American state is mentioned twice so it won't be classified as redundancy. Also, "home town" is combined since it's one word.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Good nomination hook, added a comment about it (look above), and no-unlikely violation from Earwig. Good job. — JuanGLP (talk/contribs) 02:55, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JuanGLP, thank you, I prefer your hook so I have struck mine. Also, the reason for "unlikely" from Earwig is because the 22.5% similarity is coming from a quote in the "Career" section, properly enclosed in quotes and attributed via citation. Let me know if there's anything else I can do. Thanks, --Habst (talk) 17:40, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
To eliminate redundancy of the word "train", perhaps the last three words "to train on" could be removed? --Habst (talk) 17:42, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Habst, yep there is no problem with Earwig, good thing it's cited with adequate sourcing. Also, good eye for the redundancy part of "train" and have fixed the nominated hook. Just checked it off as approved, and congrats if promoted! — JuanGLP (talk/contribs) 23:02, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Jacob Christiaan Koningsberger[edit]

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Minister of Colonies: Doel, HW van den. "Koningsberger, Jacob Christiaan (1867-1951)" (in Dutch). Huygens Institute for the History of the Netherlands. Archived from the original on 20 July 2019. Retrieved 7 May 2024.
Created by Crisco 1492 (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 661 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:41, 7 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • New article that was moved to mainspace on 7 May 2024‎ is 6,909 characters and nominated on the same day. No copyvios detected (high confidence of violation due to publication titles; AGF sources which can't go through Dup detector). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 156 characters long (under 200 character max.) and is interesting. Refs 2 and 4 (verifying the hook) are reliable sources. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 04:30, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Levi Drake Rodriguez[edit]

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  • ... that football player Levi Drake Rodriguez, considered small for his position, went on an "eat-as-much-as-humanly-possible diet" to be noticed by NFL teams?
  • Source: articles in The Athletic (1 2)
5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 179 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:14, 15 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • New enough. Long enough. 5x expansion. Reliable inline citations throughout. I couldn't check citations #1 and #2 (in The Athletic) as they're behind the paywall. Other citations do check out. AGF on the sources. Hook is interesting but it's cited to the Athletic; so AGF here too. A couple of issues: (1) his height is listed as 6-4 and also as 6-2. (6-2 was added by User Dogloverr16 on May 14th; his two sources are in conflict as well.) Issue #2: QPQ not yet done. Hybernator (talk) 00:41, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Hybernator: The Athletic articles should be viewable here and here. I'll make sure to get to the other issues soon. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:11, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • BeanieFan11, the two Athletic articles you posted are for your citation #2 (both by Kaylin Kahler). Citation #1 (Dane Brugler) still isn't there. The hook's quote isn't in either of Kahler's articles. AGF on #1 as of now. Hybernator (talk) 03:24, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • The two issues above have been fixed. Citation #1 is still behind the paywall so, the hook is still AGF. GTG. Hybernator (talk) 21:50, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
        • @Hybernator: Noting that I had based the hook based on the sources I linked. This mentions him eating "well under his eat-as-much-as-humanly-possible diet" on NFL Draft day, whereas the other one starts off talking about how he has to eat large amounts to get noticed by the NFL. Thoughts? BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:35, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for the additional info. Until citation #1 is verified, I'm afraid, it'll have to be on AGF. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 03:23, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Brad Banducci[edit]

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Moved to mainspace by GMH Melbourne (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

GMH Melbourne (talk) 07:03, 8 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • The article was moved to mainspace today, so is new enough. At just over 1800 characters, it is long enough. The article properly uses in-line citations and the copyvio detector finds nothing outside of groups and positions. The hook is interesting and cited inline. The QPQ has been done. The only thing I'll note is that there's certainly sources out there to beef up the article more, including recent contempt threats and just older general news articles about him. Anyways, looks good to go. SilverserenC 00:54, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

John Wilson (Arkansas politician)[edit]

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Created by QuicoleJR (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

QuicoleJR (talk) 23:51, 8 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Article seems in a good enough state all around. The hook checks out and is certainly good enough; I might mentioned that he was reelected to the house afterwards though! Left some comments on the talk on how this article might be improved or expanded. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:54, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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